<p class="cafe-editor-text">Today I read about Hedgehog Bakes a <a href="cake.Hedge">cake.Hedge</a> Bakes a cake is about Hedgehog likes a <a href="vake.So">vake.So</a> Hedgehog collects a recipe book and items.<br /> He follows steps and makes a <a href="cake.Suddenly">cake.Suddenly</a>,Rabbit comes, and Rabbit makes Rabbit's own recipe, but it is a failure.<br /> Next, Squirrel comes and mixes many eggs, but it is a failure too.<br /> Finally, Owl comes and nakes it, but it is also a failure.<br /> So, Hedgehog makes a cake with the recipe from the recipe book and makes delicious cake.<br /> I thought Hedgehog looked sad.I thought Owl, Squirrel, and Rabbit were bad friends.</p>
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첫댓글 훌륭하게 잘 썼구나.
계속해서 더 많이 써보고 연습해서 독후감쓰기의 패턴을 잘 익혀가면 좋겠다.
일단 독후감쓰기는 확실히 마무리하는 이번 주가 되도록 화이팅 하자.
기왕이면 한줄에 한문장으로 좀 정리해 주면 더 쉽게 읽을 수 있을듯 하구나.
동윤이 기특하다.