허윤서

[Teacher1]

Make sentences.

[student]

I splash in the water park
Amy is stand at table
Dad cimb on tree
Mom whizz a stairs
He watch out car
She creak her door

[subtutor52]

I splash in the water park. → 잘했어요!

Amy is (standing) at the table.

설명: stand → standing: 지금 서 있는 중이므로 현재진행형으로 고쳐야 해요.
at table → at the table: 정관사 the를 넣으면 더 자연스러워요.

Dad (climbs) the tree.

설명: 주어가 Dad(3인칭 단수)이므로 동사에 -s 붙이기.
cimb → climbs: 철자도 수정 필요해요.

Mom (whizzes) up the stairs.

설명: whizz는 빠르게 지나가는 소리를 낼 때 쓰여요.
a stairs → up the stairs가 자연스러워요.

He (watches out for) the car.

설명: watch out은 watch out for ~로 써야 해요.
watch → watches: 주어가 He이므로 -es 붙이기.

She (opens) her creaky door.

설명: creak은 문이 스스로 내는 소리이므로 사람이 creak을 직접 하진 않아요.
자연스럽게 creaky door로 바꾸고, opens로 동작을 표현했어요.

[Student]

Mom disappointed at my tast
Mom whisper about school

[subtutor52]

Mom disappointed (was disappointed) at my tast (with my test)
 👉 감정을 말할 땐 was disappointed라고 써야 해요.
 👉 tast는 test의 철자 실수예요.
 👉 ~에 실망하다는 with를 써요.

Mom whisper (whispered) about school (to me about school)
 👉 과거니까 whispered로 써야 해요.
 👉 누구에게 속삭였는지 to me를 넣어야 자연스러워요.

[student]

I count orang color point
My Mom covers my toy
I play with my friend hide and seek
My Mom shout her dog
I smile on my face
My Mom look her test paper

[subtutor52]

I count (orange) color point.
→ "orang"은 철자 오류예요. orange로 고쳐야 해요.

My Mom covers my toy. 맞는 문장이에요

I play (hide and seek) with my friend.
→ "play with my friend hide and seek"은 어순이 어색해서 play hide and seek with my friend로 고쳐야 자연스러워요.

My Mom (shouts) (at) her dog.
→ "Mom"은 3인칭 단수라서 shout → shouts,
→ "누구에게 소리치다"는 shout at ~ 표현을 사용해요.

I smile (on) my face → I smile (with a smile) on my face. 또는 I smile.
→ "smile on my face"는 어색한 표현이에요. 그냥 I smile. 로 쓰는 것이 가장 자연스러워요.

My Mom (looks at) her test paper.
→ "look"은 목적어를 직접 못 받기 때문에 look at ~ 형태로 써야 해요.

[student]

I want to eat some pumpkin pie
Mom sees a big witch

[subtutor52]

I want to eat some pumpkin pie.
→ Tips) 틀린 곳이 없어요. 완벽한 문장이에요!

Mom sees a big witch. 맞는 문장이에요 !

[student]

My Mom dancing with me
I play with my friend
My Mom feel very cold
I see grow my plant every morning
My Mom smile every day
I feel funny at wink

[subtutor52]

My Mom (is dancing) with me.
Tips) 진행형이므로 "dancing" 앞에 (is)가 필요해요.

I play with my friend.
Tips) 맞는 문장이에요.

My Mom (feels) very cold.
Tips) "feel" → (feels).

I (see my plant grow) every morning.
Tips) "see grow my plant" 어순 틀림 → (see my plant grow).

My Mom (smiles) every day.
Tips) "smile" → (smiles).

I feel funny (when I wink).
Tips) "at wink" ❌ → (when I wink).

[Student]

My family build a tree house
My Mom want to get a new shoes on her birthday
My Mom makes strawberry cookies
My Mom look her new shoes
My family bring some red apple

[subtutor52]

My family (builds a treehouse)
→ My family 은 단수 취급이라서 builds 가 맞고, tree house → treehouse

My mom (wants to get new shoes for her birthday)
→ want → wants, a new shoes → new shoes (shoes 는 복수), on her birthday → for her birthday

(My mom makes strawberry cookies)
→ 맞는 문장이에요.

My mom (looks at her new shoes)
→ look her → looks at her

My family (brings some red apples)
→ bring → brings, apple → apples

[Student]

I like my toy sowrd
My mom wait for my sister

[sub tutor1]

I like my toy sowrd → sword.
👉 "sowrd"는 철자가 틀렸어요. sword가 맞아요.

My mom wait → waits for my sister.
👉 주어가 My mom(엄마 한 명) 이라서 동사에 -s를 붙여 waits라고 해야 해요.

[Student]

My Mom looks for game card
My Mom pat her Dog

[sub tutor1]

My Mom looks for game card → a game card.
👉 카드가 하나일 때는 a를 붙여서 a game card라고 해야 해요.

My Mom pat → pats her Dog → dog.
👉 주어가 My Mom(엄마 한 명) 이라서 pat에 -s를 붙여 pats라고 해야 해요.
👉 동물 이름은 보통 소문자로 써서 dog라고 해야 해요.

[Student]

My mom like play game
My mom says 'stop asking and eat your barkfast!'
My mom open my sister room door
My mom smile every day morning
My mom sit down on the chiar
My mom say you finsh your homework?

[subtutor52]

My mom like play → likes to play game → games.
👉 주어가 My mom이라서 동사에 -s가 필요해요. 그리고 여러 개를 말하니까 games가 맞아요.

My mom says 'stop asking and eat your barkfast → breakfast!'
👉 breakfast가 올바른 철자예요.

My mom open → opens my sister room door → sister's room door.
👉 주어가 My mom이라서 opens, 그리고 언니/동생의 방 문이니까 sister's room door라고 해야 해요.

My mom smile → smiles every day morning → every morning.
👉 주어가 My mom이라서 smiles, 그리고 시간 표현은 every morning이라고 해야 해요.

My mom sit → sits down on the chiar → chair.
👉 주어가 My mom이라서 sits, 그리고 chair가 맞는 철자예요.

[subtutor52]

My mom say → says, you finsh → finish your homework? → Did you finish your homework?
👉 현재형 say가 아니라 says, 철자는 finish. 하지만 질문이니까 **Did you finish your homework?**라고 써야 해요.

[student]

My mom don't like love story
My mom sprint at park
My mom buys a five apartment
My mom yells My sister
My mom don't like sigh
My mom put bed on the pilow

[Sub tutor 1]

1. My mom **don't** → **doesn't** like love story → **love stories**.
👉 주어가 **My mom(한 명)**이니까 **doesn't**가 맞아요. 그리고 여러 편을 말하니 **love stories**라고 해야 해요.

2. My mom sprint → **sprints** **at park** → **in the park**.
👉 주어가 **My mom**이라서 **sprints**, 장소는 **in the park**라고 해야 해요.

3. My mom buys **a five apartment** → **an apartment on the fifth floor**.
👉 "다섯 번째 아파트"라고 하면 어색해요. 보통은 **an apartment on the fifth floor**라고 해요.

4. My mom yells **My sister** → **at my sister**.
👉 **yell at + 사람**이라고 해야 해요.

5. My mom **don't** → **doesn't** like **sigh** → **to sig

[Student]

My Mom go to bed 12:00 o'clock
MY Mom pick out at alppe at the supermarket

[Sub tutor 1]

My Mom go → goes to bed 12:00 o'clock → at 12:00.
👉 주어가 **My Mom(한 명)**이라서 goes라고 해야 해요.
👉 시간은 at 12:00이라고 쓰면 돼요. (o'clock은 필요 없어요.)
👉 바르게: My Mom goes to bed at 12:00.

My Mom pick → picks out at alppe → an apple at the supermarket.
👉 주어가 My Mom이라서 picks, 그리고 사과 하나니까 an apple이라고 해야 해요.
👉 바르게: My Mom picks out an apple at the supermarket.