<p><b>Ruby's Puppet Show</b></p><p>One day, Ruby and her friend <b>planned</b> to <b>put on a</b> puppet show for Max.</p><p>They wanted Max to be <b>a good</b> audience <b>member</b>.</p><p>But Max wasn't <b>a good</b> audience <b>member</b>.</p><p>Max <b>interrupted the</b> puppet show.</p><p>Suddenly, they heard someone <b>clapping</b>.</p><p>The owner of that sound was <b>Grandmother</b>.</p><p>She <b>enjoyed</b> their puppet show.</p><p><b>Score: B-</b></p><p><b>Tips)</b></p><ul style="list-style-type: disc;" data-ke-list-type="disc"><li><b>"Onne" → "One"</b>, <b>"planed" → "planned"</b>: 철자 오류 수정.</li><li><b>"do puppet show" → "put on a puppet show"</b>: 공연을 할 때는 "put on"을 사용해요.</li><li><b>"nice audience" → "good audience member"</b>: "audience"는 집합 명사라서 "member"를 붙이는 것이 더 자연스러워요.</li><li><b>"broke in Puppet show" → "interrupted the puppet show"</b>: "broke in"은 침입하다의 의미라 "interrupted"가 더 적절해요.</li><li><b>"claping" → "clapping"</b>: 철자 수정.</li><li><b>"She improved in their puppet show" → "She enjoyed their puppet show"</b>: "improved"는 향상시키다의 의미라 문맥상 "enjoyed"가 더 적절해요.</li></ul><p>잘했어요! 문장을 조금만 더 자연스럽게 다듬으면 훨씬 좋은 글이 될 거예요. 😊✨</p>
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