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<P>it's right that the early bird catches the worm. if i had hurried to arrive chinse hospital i coud have been treated early. i had to wait around for three hours.</P>
<P>i told my husband that i would go out around at eight thirty the next day. but he had to go out two hours later than me.</P>
<P>even though he undersood me i felt sorry to go out early than him. time past to set the table for him.</P>
<P> i'm mad at going out lately. he told me to stop it over and over and he would do it by himself.</P>
<P>when i got there there were a lot of people and moreover it was lunch time during the waiting.</P>
<P>it was pretty tantalizing to waist time. </P>
<P>as i waited i read the newspaper. it says "we are too busy to getting happy time. as the lifi is just like a battlefield we never lull or set our heart . if we henpecked our own selves we could know we've just received enormous gifts from god .to love mind, modest attitude, truth in mind ... there isn't far the happiness in truth and you have your fill of your happiness and then it comes to you what you want to have the wealth and success.</P>
<P>the excellent words make me a tranquil and happy.</P>
<P>i guess everything is in my mind. positive minds let me happy.</P></BLOCKQUOTE>
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첫댓글It's right that the early bird catches the worm. If I had hurried to arrive at Chinse hospital I coud have been treated early. I had to wait for about three hours. (arrive at 건물, arrive in 도시,나라 = get to = reach. arrive는 자동사로서 전치사가 필요하죠.) I told my husband that I would go out around at eight thirty tomorrow. (오늘 말씀하신 것이니 그냥 tomorrow라고 쓰시면 되겠죠?) but he had to go out two hours later than I.
Even though he undersood me, I felt sorry to go out early than he. Time past to set the table for him. I'm mad at going out lately. he told me to stop it over and over and he would do it by himself. When I got there there were a lot of people and moreover it was lunch time during the waiting. It was pretty annoying to waste time. (waist는 허리^^)
than은 앞뒤에 각각 비교의 대상이 놓이는데 than 뒤에서는 주절과 공통되는 부분이 생략:She is smaller than I (am). 그러나 《구어》에서는 She is smaller than me.도 쓰는데 이때의 than은 전치사로 볼 수 있다. 한편 다음 경우에는 주격이냐 목적격이냐에 따라 뜻이 달라진다：(a) He likes me better than she (does) (=than she likes me). (b) He likes me better than her (=than he likes her). 《구어》에서는 (b)로 (a)의 뜻 (=than she likes me)을 나타내기도 한다.
As I was waiting, I read the newspaper. It says "We are too busy to get happy time. Because life is just like a battlefield, we never lull or set our heart . If we henpecked ourselves, we could know we've just received enormous gifts from God; love, modest attitude, truth in mind ... It's true happiness isn't far from us and you only have to find your happiness. Whatever such as wealth and success comes to you if you want to have. The excellent words make me trinquil and happy. I guess everything is in my mind. Positive thoughts make me happy.
솔직히 영자판이 서투른데다 대소문자까지 바꿔줘야하는 상황이라 그러면 안되는줄 알면서 무시하고 소문자로 일관했네요. 자판찾느라 너무 시간이 걸려요.쉽지가않고 세세한 것들 예를 들자면 콤마를 찍어야하는지 지적해주시는 그런 세세한 영문법들이힘든데 첨삭해주셔서 도움되고 정말좋아요.
첫댓글 It's right that the early bird catches the worm. If I had hurried to arrive at Chinse hospital I coud have been treated early. I had to wait for about three hours. (arrive at 건물, arrive in 도시,나라 = get to = reach. arrive는 자동사로서 전치사가 필요하죠.) I told my husband that I would go out around at eight thirty tomorrow. (오늘 말씀하신 것이니 그냥 tomorrow라고 쓰시면 되겠죠?) but he had to go out two hours later than I.
Even though he undersood me, I felt sorry to go out early than he. Time past to set the table for him. I'm mad at going out lately. he told me to stop it over and over and he would do it by himself. When I got there there were a lot of people and moreover it was lunch time during the waiting. It was pretty annoying to waste time. (waist는 허리^^)
than은 앞뒤에 각각 비교의 대상이 놓이는데 than 뒤에서는 주절과 공통되는 부분이 생략:She is smaller than I (am). 그러나 《구어》에서는 She is smaller than me.도 쓰는데 이때의 than은 전치사로 볼 수 있다. 한편 다음 경우에는 주격이냐 목적격이냐에 따라 뜻이 달라진다：(a) He likes me better than she (does) (=than she likes me). (b) He likes me better than her (=than he likes her). 《구어》에서는 (b)로 (a)의 뜻 (=than she likes me)을 나타내기도 한다.
As I was waiting, I read the newspaper. It says "We are too busy to get happy time. Because life is just like a battlefield, we never lull or set our heart . If we henpecked ourselves, we could know we've just received enormous gifts from God; love, modest attitude, truth in mind ... It's true happiness isn't far from us and you only have to find your happiness. Whatever such as wealth and success comes to you if you want to have. The excellent words make me trinquil and happy. I guess everything is in my mind. Positive thoughts make me happy.
유유자적님, The last sentence makes me happy too. YOUR Writing is so GREAT! Keep writing!!!
솔직히 영자판이 서투른데다 대소문자까지 바꿔줘야하는 상황이라 그러면 안되는줄 알면서 무시하고 소문자로 일관했네요. 자판찾느라 너무 시간이 걸려요.쉽지가않고 세세한 것들 예를 들자면 콤마를 찍어야하는지 지적해주시는 그런 세세한 영문법들이힘든데 첨삭해주셔서 도움되고 정말좋아요.