짧은 작문인데.. 어색한 부분 수정 부탁드립니다~ ㅠㅠ

[눈물]

경매번역카페 무료번역질문:

9:00 (students are noisy and messy / speak up a little / scold and punish )

1:00   (visit the bank / pay the tax / slip my mind )

4:00 (finish the class / home classroom / clean the classroom with brooms and mops )

6:00 (meet my old friends / do not see her for ages / chat / go shopping together)

9:00  (come back home …… )

위의 것을 바탕으로 작문하였는데... 어색한 부분이 없는지... 어색하다면 고쳐주세요~ ㅠㅠ

글구 여기서 do not see her for ages 해석 어찌 하나요 ?? 그 나이로 보이지 않았다 즉 젋거나 늙어 보였다는 뜻인가요?? ㅠㅠ

at 9:00 My students were noisy and messy. So I spoke up a little and I scolded and punished my students

at 1:00   A few minutes later,  I slipped my mind. I visited the bank to pay the tax.

at 4:00 I finished the class. When I came back home classroom, students clean the classroom with brooms and mops.

at 6:00 I met my old friends. but I didn't see her for ages. We chatted and went shopping together

at 9:00  I came back home

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[ENKO해결사]

정말 오랬동안 못 보았다는 의미로 이해하시면 될 것 같네요