Re: Caillou-Kyle

[Teacher Winget]

Caillou's Surprise Breakfast

Caillou woke up very early.

Caillou looked at his parents sleeping.

Caillou was hungry.

Caillou decided to have a breakfast.

Caillou was making breakfast.

Caillou's parents heard a something in the kitchen.

Caillou's parents woke up.

Caillou's parents looking he prepare a celaer for breakfast. saw him preparing cereal for breakfast.

Caillou said to his parents, "Surprise breakfast!"

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Score: B

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Tips):

1. 문법 수정:

   • "Caillou look his parents" → "Caillou looked at his parents" (과거형 및 올바른 전치사 사용).
   • "Caillou hungry" → "Caillou was hungry" (문장 완성).
   • "Caillou decide" → "Caillou decided" (과거형).
   • "Caillou making breakfast" → "Caillou was making breakfast" (과거진행형).
   • "Caillou's parents hear" → "Caillou's parents heard" (과거형).
   • "Caillou's parents wake up" → "Caillou's parents woke up" (과거형).
   • "looking he prepare a celaer" → "saw him preparing cereal" (문법 수정 및 철자 오류 "celaer" → "cereal").

2. 내용 추가하기:

   • Caillou가 어떤 음식을 만들었는지 더 자세히 설명하면 좋습니다.
   • 부모님의 반응을 추가하면 이야기가 더 풍부해질 것입니다.