Re: Max and Ruby-오성연

[Teacher1]

The title of this cartoon is Max and Ruby. I will summarize this cartoon.

01:) Surprise Ruby
On Ruby's One Ruby's birthday, Ruby dressed in up her tiara and dress. She was excited expected because of her friends and presents her present. Max wondered why she was so happy, but he noticed that it was her birthday. Ruby taught him what a what is surprise is. So Max thought of a good idea and he stole her tiara.

When Ruby followed Max, Max ran around over and over again again and again. Max made her tired, but Ruby never gave up never give up to finding her tiara. Max went to Grandmother's house hopping like like a frog, and Ruby followed him it.

At last, they arrived at Grandmother's house. Ruby's friends and Grandmother grandmother surprised were surprising her. So Ruby felt very so happy!

I think this whole situation happened because of Max's idea for Ruby this story this happen is Max's ideas to Ruby. 👑

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📌 문법 포인트:

• "One Ruby's birthday" → "On Ruby’s birthday" → "On"을 사용해야 해요.
• "dressed up her tiara and dress" → "dressed in her tiara and dress" → "dressed in + 옷"이 맞아요.
• "expected" → "was excited" → "expect"는 "예상하다"라는 뜻이므로, "excited"가 더 자연스러워요.
• "what is surprise" → "what a surprise is" → 의문문이 아닌 문장에서 "what a surprise is" 형태를 써야 해요.
• "never give up to find" → "never gave up finding" → "give up" 뒤에는 동사 원형이 아니라 "동사-ing"가 와야 해요.
• "like a frog" → "hopping like a frog" → "like a frog"만 쓰면 "개구리처럼 행동했다"는 의미가 부족해요.
• "Grandmother"는 특정한 인물이므로 **"Grandmother’s house"**로 대문자를 사용해야 해요.

📌 이야기 발전:

• Max는 왜 루비를 피해서 뛰어다녔을까요? 🤔
• 루비는 처음에 왜 Max가 도망가는지 몰랐을 수도 있어요. 그 부분을 더 자세히 써볼까요?
• 파티에서 어떤 선물을 받았는지 추가하면 이야기가 더 흥미로울 거예요! 🎁🎉