[Corrected] A clear and fine autumn day^^

[Jim Lee]

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hi jim^^ This is my second writing. How was your today? Um... I spent the whole day studying at the library and attending a lecture in the institute. Today I went to the jin-su national university of education. My home is next to that university. So I went that university by bicycle to study English and to do any other things. Even though I have been living this city for 10 years, I really don't know about that university. When I went there, there are few student at that library just like empty. I'm just studyed English and read the English written book titled of " A dog of flanders." In the evening, I went private institute to improve my speaking skills. This is all about my today's work. Have a good night, Jim^^	Hhi, J jim^^ This is my second writing. How was your day today? Um... I spent the whole day studying at the library and attending a lecture in the institute. Today, I went to the Jjin-su Nnational Uuniversity of education. My home is next to that university. So I went to that university by bicycle to study English and to do any other things. Even though I have been living in this city for 10 years, I really don't know much about that university. When I went there, there wereare only a few students at theat library.  It was almost just like empty. I'm just studiyed English.  I  and read an the English written book titled of , " A Ddog of Fflanders." In the evening, I went to a private institute to improve my speaking skills. This is all about my daytoday's work. Have a good night, Jim^^
Comment: Very good!  However, try to make sentences flow.  There were some parts where a new sentence did not sound good because your topic changed drastically.  You need to make the transition smoother.  Take a good look at my corrections. Personal comment:  Hi, there.  Thank you for asking how my day went. I had a good day, thanks. You must be a very diligent student.  I am glad to see that you are very eager to learn English.  Keep it up and you will become a native speaker in no time. ;-)

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I thank you heartily because of your sincere and quick correction. You gave me the greenlight to study foreign language.*^^*

[Jim Lee]

I am glad to hear that you are feeling that way. Keep up the great work!