The title of this cartoon is "Max's Halloween."
It's It was Halloween, so Ruby and Max were going to trick or treat. Ruby dressed up like as Cinderella. Max dressed up like as a vampire. He put on fake hands, a black cape, and teeth. But Ruby wanted to Max dress to dress up like as a little prince. So, she took off Max's costume and gave him a red cape and sword. After all, Max wear wore the vampire costume. Then Louise came. They were going to trick or treat ing to at grandma's house. They arrived at grandma's house. Ruby said, "Don't scare your grandma." But, grandma was dressed the as a vampire.
Grade: B+
Tips:
- Use correct verb tenses consistently (was instead of it's, wore instead of wear).
- Ensure proper article usage (a black cape, a little prince).
- Correct spelling and grammar (dress as instead of dress like).