Years ago, there was a king who had a special hand mill when it turn that come out salt.
One day, a man planed stole special hand mill.
Then the man climed the wall and come into the placed.And he found the hand mill then he stole it.
Next he ran away to hometown, in the ship,he make salt.When he turned the special hand mill,he thought he become the rich.
But he drop hand mill in the sea.
I think this book is interesting.
첫댓글 Years ago, there was a king who had a special hand mill. When it was turned, salt would come out.
One day, a man planned to steal the special hand mill.
Then the man climbed the wall and entered the palace. He found the hand mill and stole it.
Next, he ran away to his hometown. On the ship, he made salt. When he turned the special hand mill, he thought he would become rich.
But he dropped the hand mill into the sea.
I think this book is interesting.
주요 수정 사항:
"when it turn that come out salt" → "When it was turned, salt would come out."
"a man planed stole special hand mill" → "a man pl