Re: Max and Ruby summary-Ellie

[Teacher Winget]

Max's Castle

One day, Ruby and Ruby’s friend built bulit a block castle that looked like a picture.

When they were looking for the materials matarial for the castle, Max touched touch the castle.

So, Ruby said, “Please don’t touch it and play with your toy.”

Then, Ruby and Ruby’s friend built were built a castle.

But Max put put the another more blocks in his wagon and pulled them to Ruby and her friend.

Max poured pour the blocks in front of infront of the castle.

Ruby’s friend had a good idea for Max’s blocks and used them to fix the castle successfully soccessful.

Then, they put the princess doll inside the castle, and Max put his rabbit rabit doll inside too.

Score: A-

Tips)

• "bulit" → "built" → 철자 확인!
• "matarial" → "materials" → 여러 개니까 "materials"!
• "touch" → "touched" → 과거형 사용!
• "were built" → "built" → "were built"은 수동태라서 여기서는 "built"가 맞아요!
• "pour" → "poured" → 과거형 사용!
• "infront of" → "in front of" → 띄어쓰기 확인!
• Max가 마지막에 castle을 어떻게 완성하는 데 도움이 되었는지 조금 더 설명하면 이야기가 더 좋아질 거예요!