The title of this cartoon is "Max's Halloween."
Max and Ruby are ready for Halloween. Ruby is dressed as Cinderella and Max is dressed as a vampire. But Ruby doesn't want Max to be a vampire, so she brings takes away his vampire teeth. Max still wants to be a vampire and finds his teeth again. Ruby brings takes the teeth again away again and Max is ready dresses Max as a little prince. But Max readyti changes back into a vampire. When Ruby's friends come arrive, they all go to meet their grandma, and grandma is ready to dressed as a vampire too.
I think this book is funny. Max is so funny.
Grade: B-
Tips:
- Ensure subject-verb agreement (Ruby takes, Max finds).
- Use proper punctuation and capitalization.
- Use clear and complete sentences.
- Ensure consistent verb tenses.
- Make sure all actions and events are clearly described.