Re: Max and Ruby (Olivia)

[Teacher Winget]

The title of this episode is "Ruby's Merit Badge." Today, I will summarize the Max and Ruby story. Ruby decided to go Girl Scouts to the Girl Scouts with Louise. Louise decided to help Ruby get the Merit Badge. But Max said he wanted a Popsicles popsicle. Ruby and Louise practiced healing to get Merit Badge the Merit Badge, and when Max came, they wrapped Max's body in bandages. When the Girl Scouts finally arrived, Ruby and Louise ran over, and in the meantime, Max got the Popsicle popsicle, but the fire truck took it, and he followed them it. Because of that, the bandages were wrapped around the table like spider webs, and the Girl Scout leader gave Ruby another badge.

I think Ruby should have asked Max if she could bandage him.

Score: B+

Tips:

• Clarify the sequence of events, especially how Max's actions led to the bandages being wrapped around the table.
• Reflect on how Ruby could have handled the situation better, such as by asking Max for permission before bandaging him.
• Ensure proper verb forms and tense consistency (e.g., "followed" instead of "followed them").
• Use correct sentence structure to maintain clarity (e.g., "Ruby and Louise practiced healing to get the Merit Badge" instead of "practiced healing to get Merit Badge").
• Simplify and clarify sentences for better readability (e.g., "the bandages were wrapped around the table like spider webs" instead of "bandages were wrapped around the table like spider webs").