Re: 이상민

[Teacher1]

Caillou played with his cat and his toy.

Suddenly, his dad called Caillou for snack time.

Caillou went to his dad.

And he went to his room and found his cat.

Caillou shouted, "Come here right now!"

Caillou walked around his home, but he didn’t find it.

He went to his mom and asked, "Mom, do you know where Gilbert is?"

Mom said, "Yes."

"Oh, where is he?"

Mom said, "In your room."

And Caillou discovered it!

Score: C-

Tips)

1. "Caillou play with cat and his toy" → "Caillou played with his cat and his toy."
   👉 "play"는 과거형 "played"로, 그리고 "his cat"이 자연스러워요!
2. "Suddenly his called caillou snack time" → "Suddenly, his dad called Caillou for snack time."
   👉 "his called"은 틀린 문장이므로 "his dad called"로 수정했어요!
3. "Caillou go to the dad" → "Caillou went to his dad."
   👉 "go"는 과거형 "went"으로, 그리고 "the dad"보다는 "his dad"이 맞아요!
4. "And he go to the his room and find the his cat" → "And he went to his room and found his cat."
   👉 "go"는 과거형 "went", "find"는 과거형 "found"로 수정해야 해요!
5. "Caillou shut come here right now." → "Caillou shouted, 'Come here right now!'"
   👉 "shut"이 아니라 "shouted"가 올바른 표현이에요!
6. "Caillou walk around this home but he doesn't find it" → "Caillou walked around his home, but he didn’t find it."
   👉 과거 시제에 맞게 동사를 수정했어요!
7. "He go to the mom and asked mom do you know where is caillou?" → "He went to his mom and asked, 'Mom, do you know where Gilbert is?'"
   👉 문장을 자연스럽게 수정했어요!
8. "Mom said your room and caillou discovery it" → "Mom said, 'In your room.' And Caillou discovered it!"
   👉 문장이 자연스럽도록 수정했어요!