The title of this story is "Max and Ruby: Max's Holloween Halloween, Ruby's Leaf Collection, The Blue Tarantula."
Ep.1 Max and Ruby were preparing for Holloween Halloween. Max wore vampire teeth. Ruby wore a pink dress and a crown. Max dressed as a vampire. Except for Max's cape, Ruby put everything in a box. Ruby turned Max's cape around and gave him a toy sword. But Max pulled out his vampire costume again. While Ruby put on makeup, Max dressed as a vampire and surprised Ruby. Ruby put everything except for Max's cape in a box again. When Ruby's friend came to play, Max dressed as a vampire and surprised Ruby. Max came out dressed as a vampire and surprised other friends their other friends. They went to their grandmother's house, but Grandmother grandmother was dressed as a vampire too.
I think this book is funny.
Grade: B
Tips:
- Ensure correct spelling (Halloween instead of Holloween).
- Use clear and complete sentences.
- Avoid repetition for clarity.
- Use proper punctuation and capitalization throughout.