The book title is "Milly, Molly and Bush Bob." One day Milly and Molly saw the smoke from BushBob's chimney. And they decided to go to BushBob's cottage. BushBob threw his arms up in delight. He had a cow that gave him milk for his tea and cream for his porridge. His sheep gave him wool for his sweaters and pebbles for his garden. BushBob grew all his own vegetables and kept bees for their honey. BushBob and Milly, Molly sat on the bench under the apple tree. They shut their eyes and listened carefully. BushBob was enjoying it all for one last time. Milly and Molly thanked and hugged BushBob. A long time ago, when they looked out across the hills, BushBob's cottage changed to a new apartment. They didn't listen to any sounds. But a long time ago, BushBob came back to the hills. Milly and Molly felt so happy!
Grade: B
Tips):
- Consistency: Use the same spelling and capitalization for names (BushBob instead of Bushbob or BushBub).
- Verb Tense: Ensure verb tenses are consistent throughout the story (e.g., "feel" should be "felt").
- Clarity: Ensure sentences are clear and complete (e.g., "A long time ago" instead of "a long times ago").
- Punctuation: Add necessary punctuation for readability (e.g., commas and periods).
- Prepositions: Use correct prepositions (e.g., "go to" instead of "go").
- Articles: Use correct articles (e.g., "a new apartment" instead of "a new arpartment").