Re: 1c summary Samuel

[Teacher1]

The Book's title is "Milly, Molly and Bush Bob." Milly and Molly looked out across the hills from the upstairs window.

They left their footprints in the dewy grass behind them. Bush Bob threw his arms up in delight.

Bush Bob had a beard the color of his sweater and a hat that never left his head. He had a cow that gave him milk for his tea and cream for his porridge. His orchard gave him apples, pears, peaches, and plums. "If you listen very carefully, you'll hear the skylark singing her heart out over the hay field in the valley below." "Great Aunt Hattie has died and left me her apartment and a bank full of money." Milly and Molly knew it wouldn't be the same without him. They wondered if they would ever see him again.

"You rascals," he said. "I think you smelled the bread, fresh from my oven." The book is sad because I think Bush Bob and Milly and Molly are sad. Milly and Molly and Bush Bob are sad, so I am sad, too.

Grade: C+

Tips:

1. Book Titles: Put the title in quotation marks.
2. Verb Tense: Use the correct past tense (e.g., "looked" not "look").
3. Punctuation: Add periods and commas where needed.
4. Articles: Use "a" and "an" correctly.
5. Clarity: Make sentences clear and complete.