This story's title is "Milly, Molly and BushBob."
In this story, Milly and Molly could just see the smoke from BushBob's chimney.
Milly and Molly followed the track along the edge of the bush to BushBob's cottage.
BushBob threw his arms up in delight.
He had a cow, hen, garden, vegetables, apples, pears, peaches, and plums.
Milly and Molly sat with BushBob on the old bench under the apple tree.
As time passed, they went back home.
Grade: B-
Tips:
- Names: Make sure names are spelled correctly (BushBob).
- Punctuation: Add periods at the end of sentences.
- Lists: Use "and" before the last item in a list.
- Verb Tense: Use the correct past tense (e.g., "went" instead of "be came").
- Clarity: Make sure sentences are complete and clear.