<p ><span >Some people think that learning one skill is
important when you have occupation. However, in my opinion, it is better to
learn many variety skills.</span></p><p ><span style="font-size: 10pt;"><br></span></p><p ><span style="font-size: 10pt;">The
first reason is, nowadays, it is necessary to know about many skills when you
have job. If you are really predominant in one skill and you want to have dream
which is related with that skill, it is helpful to achieve your dream. However,
it is better to learn many skills and versatile in many sides. So, you can
think in variety ways and more flexibly. (</span><span style="font-size: 10pt; color: red;">For example</span><span style="font-size: 10pt;">)
</span><span style="font-size: 10pt; color: rgb(0, 32, 96);">Example</span><span style="font-size: 10pt;">, some people think that athletes and
actors are only good at playing sports (</span><span style="font-size: 10pt; color: red;">and</span><span style="font-size: 10pt;">) acting
but I don’t think so. Nowadays, people who have job related with sport, art,
music, they should know common sense too (</span><span style="font-size: 10pt; color: red;">and</span><span style="font-size: 10pt;">)
if you want to advance abroad, speaking English is essential. Also if they
can’t have that job anymore or stop, they must find other job that they can do it.
And if you are good in other skills, it will be helpful for you.</span><br></p><p ><span style="font-size: 10pt;"><br></span></p><p ><span >Second reason is that, if you are better in
many skills, you have many choices to choose <strike><span style="color: rgb(0, 32, 96);">your</span>
</strike>(<span style="color:red">of what</span>) </span></p><p ><span >occupation (<span style="color:red">you
want</span>). If you are already setting a goal and preparing for your dream,
it is <strike><span style="color:#002060">okay</span> </strike>(<span style="color:red">good/better</span>) </span><span style="font-size: 10pt;"> to study for your dream right away. However, (</span><span style="font-size: 10pt; color: red;">if</span><span style="font-size: 10pt;">)
you aren’t ready of your dream, it is better to learn many skills (</span><span style="font-size: 10pt; color: red;">first</span><span style="font-size: 10pt;">), so (</span><span style="font-size: 10pt; color: red;">that</span><span style="font-size: 10pt;">), you
can find your talent and interest. That is why many students try variety
activities when they’re young. After you find your talent, you should develop
that skill.</span></p><p ><span style="font-size: 10pt;"><br></span></p><p ><span >Because of these reasons, I prefer to learn
many skills than to specialize in one skill.</span></p><p ><span > </span></p><p ><span ><br></span></p><p ><span >Comment;</span></p><p ><span style="font-size: 10pt;"><br></span></p><p ><span style="font-size: 10pt; color: rgb(102, 0, 255);">Hi Candy for your writing I just added some
words especially the connecting words so that the one that you’re trying to say
can be more understandable. In my observation you able express your opinion
well about enhancing </span></p><p ><span ><span style="color: rgb(102, 0, 255);">some skills which could help for the future job. Same
opinion with you, I think we must engage into various skills than focusing only
one skill.</span></span></p>
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