The book's title is 'Milly and Molly and bushbob Bushbob'. There was some smoke at the mountain. And that's a bushbob's Bushbob's chimney's smoke. Milly and Molly fallow follow the track of Bushbob's foot. Bushbob had a cow that gave milk for his tea and porridge, a roosted rooster on his bed head, a sheep that gave a sweaters and pebbles for his garden, vegetables and bees for honey. Milly and Molly fallow follow the bush Bob Bushbob and they seat sit under the tree. Bush Bob Bushbob close closes his eyes and sleep sleeps quietly. Bushbob goes back to the city**. T**here was no cow, no roost rooster, no sheep, no bees or and no vegetable vegetables. He fill feels lonley lonely and came comes back.
Grade: B
Tips)
- Use capital letters for names like "Bushbob" every time.
- Make sure to use present tense or past tense verbs throughout the story, not both.
- Add more details about how Milly and Molly felt during their adventure.
- Explain why Bushbob went to the city and why he came back.