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Question 4-6 4. What do you do for a living? (15 sec) I’ve worked for 4years at travel agency, but quitted the job a few months ago. And I’m studying to get a better job currently. 5. When you get (or earn) money, what do you do at first? (15sec) I usaually deposit all the money I get to CMA account and divide into other bank account or spend as my plan. 6. What is the best way to grow your money? (30sec) I don’t agree that keeping the cash with no plan is the best plan. At first, you should keep interested in economy; especially interest rates and knowledge of investment method. And you have strategy and information. Upon up and down of interest rates, you can make a choice where you put the money. Question 10 [proposed problem] Hello. I took a trip to Beijing, China through your company last week. It was a 4nights 5days group tour. We happened to visit Jewel shop though it was not included in our original itinerary. Our guide, Ms. Wang almost insisted to visit Jade show room, who said it is one of what to see while being in China. As a result, we skipped the Forbidden City among our itinerary. Anyway, I dropped by the shop and bought jade accessories; necklace, ring and bracelet for my mother. They said it is much cheaper than those of Korea, but quality is better. On returning home, I noticed all of them were a fake. Furthermore, it was almost three times expensive than that of Korea. This made my memory to trip the worst. I want get back my money for this product and proper compensation for my precious trip. Please call back right away. My name is Sunny and you can reach me at 555-6600. [answer]- 60 seconds Good afternoon, Sunny. On behalf of World Travel, I’m sorry there was a change in confirmed itinerary first. As I got your message, I got our Beijing office report on this matter and check the jade accessories. We do not visit any shopping center unless there is any prior notice or agreement before departure. To make it correct promptly, we will deposit to your account including shipping charge if you kindly send them to me with the receipt. I will update you by tomorrow morning with any news. My name is Jane. Do not hesitate to contact me at 123-4567 if you have any further inquiry. Thanks your patience. |
Question 4-6 4. What do you do for a living? (15 sec) I And now, I’m studying to get a better job 5. When you get (or earn) money, what do you do at first? (15sec) I Or, I just spend it as I had planned 6. What is the best way to grow your money? (30sec) I don’t agree that just keeping At first, you should keep yourself interested in the economy; especially interest rates and other types of investments.
Question 10 [proposed problem] Hello. I took a trip to Beijing, China through your company last week. It was a 4 nights 5 days group tour. We happened to visit a Jewel shop though it was not included in our original itinerary. Our guide, Ms. Wang almost insisted Anyway, I dropped by the shop and bought jade accessories; a necklace, ring and bracelet for my mother. They said On returning home, I noticed that all of them were This made my memory Please call me back right away. My name is Sunny and you can reach me at 555-6600. [answer]- 60 seconds Good afternoon, Sunny. On behalf of World Travel, As I got your message, I called To make I will update you |