첫댓글Hey~Kevin, I couldn't help being surprised at the sight of your video clip with all your mind. I found out that your potential to be a eloquent speaker, because you went the extra mile with this part. For the better performance, I want to give you feedback. [live]: make the sound more shorter like "릅", and you dropped out ' -ed' ending sound. keep in mind. [morning]: please make sure the' R sound' is placed between the letter O and N. [prepare]: It has to be sounded like "펄페얼" than "프리페얼". Don't forget it!! [tomorrow]: I hope you speak this word like "트마로우" not "투마로우".
첫댓글 Hey~Kevin, I couldn't help being surprised at the sight of your video clip with all your mind. I found out that your potential to be a eloquent speaker, because you went the extra mile with this part.
For the better performance, I want to give you feedback.
[live]: make the sound more shorter like "릅", and you dropped out ' -ed' ending sound. keep in mind.
[morning]: please make sure the' R sound' is placed between the letter O and N.
[prepare]: It has to be sounded like "펄페얼" than "프리페얼". Don't forget it!!
[tomorrow]: I hope you speak this word like "트마로우" not "투마로우".
[deep]: It's a long vowel. So speak more longer than this for the better.
Thank your efforts!