The book's title is "Milly and Molly’s Morsels."
Aunt wasn't in her garden. Mr. Burger had closed his shop. Milly and Molly found a basket. The basket had some vegetables. After Aunt came back to her garden, Milly and Molly saw Mr. Burger in his chair. Mr. Burger made a vegetable dish. Then Mr. Burger added vegetables to the burger. The children rushed to eat it.
After reading this book, I think the story is very interesting.
Grade: B+
Tips:
- Provide more details in the conclusion.
- Make sure verbs are in the correct tense, like "Mr. Burger had closed" instead of "Mr. Burger is shut up."
- Use proper transitions to connect ideas, like "After reading this book" instead of "After."