Re: Read it 2 summary Ruby

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This story was is about Not Your Typical Ice Cream.

Frist First, In in Turkey, people eat a unique kind of ice cream called dondurma.

Next, it has special ingredien salep a special ingredient called salep, and it make dondurma hardly makes dondurma harder than regular ice cream.

Then, all over Turkey, you can easily find towers of stacked ice cream, maybe it's Turkey made by Turkish ice cream vendors.

Next, they like to tease their customers.

In the end, this entertaining performance makes for and an even more memorable ice cream experience.

I think this story was fun.

Score: B+

Tips)

• make -> makes / hardly -> harder: dondurma는 하나(단수)라서 makes라고 쓰고, '~보다 더 단단한'이라고 비교할 때는 harder를 써요! (makes dondurma harder)

• First / an: '첫째로'의 올바른 스펠링은 First예요! 그리고 '더욱 ~한'이라고 할 때는 and가 아니라 an이 맞아요! (an even more)

• 풍부한 표현력 최고!: 터키 아이스크림의 재료(salep)부터 판매원 아저씨들의 재미있는 장난까지 줄거리를 정말 알차고 매끄럽게 잘 정리했어요! 오타만 조금 더 신경 쓰면 A+도 문제없어요!