Re: 1C 204 (Yulia)

[Sub Tutor 3]

The book title is "Milly and Molly's Morsels."

Their Aunt Maude wasn't in her garden, and Stringer wasn't practicing his shots, and Mr. Burger had shut up his shop. So they found Aunt Maude slumped over a basket of vegetables, because her spinach is stunted and potatoes are bumpy and tomatoes are lopsided. So Aunt Maude is upset. And they found Stringer slumped over his basketball, because he's been dumped from the team and he doesn't have stamina. But he hates to eat vegetables. And they found Mr. Burger slumped in his chair, because he's been blamed for everybody's health problems. Milly and Molly decided to solve everybody's problems. They helped Stringer eat vegetables. And they helped Mr. Burger make a good restaurant. And they paid a grateful Aunt Maude for her basket of vegetables. So Aunt Maude, Stringer, and Mr. Burger are happy, because Milly and Molly helped them.

Grade: B

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Tips:

1. Use past tense consistently for actions that happened in the past, like "decided" instead of "decide."
2. Correct verb forms and agreements, like "he's been dumped" instead of "He've been dump" and "doesn't" instead of "don't."
3. Make sure to clarify relationships and actions, like "helped them" instead of "helped us."