Re: Reed it Sofia

[Teacher Winget]

The story’s title is Aerobic vs Anaerobic Exercise.

l I think today’s story is very interesting because l I don’t like exercise . also Also, sometimes playing I enjoy playing exercise . So, I think aerobic because it is so slowly exercise exercise is better because it is a slower exercise . Today’s lesson l learn taught me about aerobic exercise so l can now I can do aerobics like a swimming and jogging.

My favorite exercise is jogging. l I think this book is fun!!

Score: B

Tips:

1. Remember to use capital letters at the beginning of sentences.
2. Use punctuation like periods and commas to separate your ideas.
3. Try to use connecting words like "because," "and," or "so" to make your sentences flow better.
4. Be specific about what you enjoy or learn, like "I enjoy jogging because it makes me feel strong."