Re: 1c 212 summary Ruby

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This story was is about Milly, Molly and Oink. First, Farmer Hegarty had two pigs. Then, this year, they having they had ten piglets. Next, they taught Oink to push a box to eat his meals. Then, strangers bundled Oink into the trunk of a car. In the end, Oink came back to Farmer Hegarty's farm. I think this story was fun.

Score: A-

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1. they having -> they had: '가지고 있었다'라는 과거 이야기를 할 때는 having이 아니라 과거형 동사 had를 써야 해요! (they had ten piglets)

2. 순서대로 차근차근!: First, Then, Next, In the end 같은 순서 연결어를 활용해서 글의 흐름을 아주 매끄럽게 잘 작성했어요!

3. 완벽한 줄거리 요약!: Oink가 태어나서 상자 밀기 훈련을 받은 이야기부터, 낯선 사람들에게 끌려갔다가 다시 농장으로 돌아오는 전체 줄거리를 정말 훌륭하게 요약했어요! 대단해요!