Re: Read it (Ellie)

[Teacher Winget]

Today's story title is "Aerobic vs. Anaerobic Exercise." Exercise is a great way to stay healthy. first First, aerobic exercise is long and steady. So,diligent So, diligent people them find them very good Exercise exercise. of Examples are swimming and Jogging jogging. Aerobic exercise uses oxygen to keep working working. last Last, anaerobic exercise is short and intense. So So, lazy people who prefer short workouts are find it very good for exercise. And anaerobic exercise is very hard.

Score: B-

Tips:

1. Always start sentences with a capital letter.
2. Be consistent with capitalization for terms like "aerobic" and "anaerobic."
3. Ensure punctuation, like periods and commas, is used correctly.
4. Avoid using "lazy" to describe people; instead, you could say, "people who prefer short workouts."
5. Expand your thoughts for clarity and detail. For example, how does Aerobic exercise use oxygen? Try to answer questions like this.