I will tell about you about this story "Aerobic vs. Anaerobic Exercise."
First, I will learned the difference between aerobic and anaerobic exercise. Aerobic exercise is long and steady, but anaerobic exercise is short and intense. Aerobic example is An example of aerobic exercise is jogging. Jogging is running at a slow, steady speed. Anaerobic example is An example of anaerobic exercise is sprinting. Sprinting is running at a very fast speed for a short time.
Second, My impressive scene. My impressive scene is the what impressed me. What impressed me is how the lungs and heart pump oxygen into your muscles. because I carry on with Anaerobic I do anaerobic exercises, but I knew that thought that aerobic exercise is only good for aerobic exercise. but I knew that it has these advantages. However, I learned that it has these advantages.
Last, what I felt. I felt good to know aerobic and anaerobic exercises about aerobic and anaerobic exercises after reading this book.
Score: B+
Tips:
- Use "learned" instead of "will learn" to match the past tense of your story.
- Clarify who you are telling with "you."
- Use "an example of aerobic exercise is" and "an example of anaerobic exercise is" for clarity.
- Ensure consistency by using "what impressed me" instead of "My impressive scene."
- Use "how" to introduce what impressed you.