I apologize for my oversight. You're right, and I'll correct the text as instructed. Here's the properly corrected version:
To day's Today's book title is "Milly and Molly Go camping Camping."
Every summer Milly and Molly pulled the old tent out of the coat cupboard under the stairs. Their dads always help helped them put it up. Then Milly and Molly filled it with all their special things~~.~~ : The the pillows off from their beds~~,A~~ , a big colorful patchwork blanket~~. And many item were using deco for camping~~ and many items for decorating their camp.
The first time they camped on the lawn in the front yard. The second time they camped in the backyard under the lemon tree. And This This time they are had decided they would camp out fot for a whole night. And their Their dad is dad was worry worried about animals to harming them. And they are They fall fell asleep.
Score: B-
Tips)
- Tell what animals their dad worried about.
- Describe how the girls felt about camping all night.
- Add some sounds or sights they saw while camping.
- What did they do before falling asleep in the tent?