Re: 1B 63 Louis(윤준기)

[Sub tutor 1]

UFOs and Aliens

People and animals live in earth  on Earth.
Living things on other planets are called  Aliens aliens.
The most common story about aliens is about UFOS UFOs.
Some people say they have seen a flashing or moving light.
Even long ago, people talked about strange things in the sky.
He said They said it appeared and disappeared several times.
A few years ago, in Venezuela, many people said they saw a UFO.
People say they have seen UFOs, but they don't have any proof.

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Corrections:

1. in earth → on Earth (Use "on" for places like Earth, and capitalize "Earth.")
2. Aliens → aliens (Lowercase "aliens" because it's not at the start of a sentence.)
3. UFOS → UFOs (Corrected capitalization.)
4. He said → They said (Changed "He" to "They" for consistency, since it refers to multiple people.)

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Score: A-

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Tips):

• "UFO"는 "Unidentified Flying Object"의 줄임말이에요. 그 의미도 추가해보세요!
• "People say they have seen UFOs" 뒤에 그들이 믿는 이유나 생각을 덧붙이면 더 좋을 것 같아요.