Today's story of title is "Boxing the Stress Away." Heather just started middle school two weeks ago. But Heather had a lot of stress. So Heather and his her sibling Tom go went to a boxing gym and learned boxing. Their trainer is was Mr. Roberts. Boxing is very healthy and gives you energy, so boxing is a very good exercise. Boxing is also easy and fun. After Heather and Tom finished boxing, they were exhausted, so they lie laid on the mat.
Score: B
Tips:
- Add more details about how boxing helped Heather relieve their stress.
- Reflect on what makes boxing both fun and beneficial as an exercise.
- Add your reflection on the lesson.
- Consider mentioning how Heather and Tom felt after their boxing session beyond just being exhausted.
- Ensure proper verb forms and tense consistency (e.g., "went" instead of "go" and "was" instead of "is").
- Use correct pronouns for clarity (e.g., "her" instead of "his" for Heather).
- Correct sentence structure and word choice to maintain clarity (e.g., "laid" instead of "lie").
- Simplify sentences for better readability (e.g., "Boxing is also easy and fun" instead of repeating "And boxing is...").