Re: Caillou's Surprise Breakfast-안하은

[Teacher1]

The title of this story is “Caillou's Surprise Breakfast.”

Caillou check sletp the parents. checked if his parents were sleeping.

Caillou is was hungry, so he Cauillou prepared breakfast by him self himself.

Cauillou was surprise from parents. Caillou was surprised by his parents.

Caillou gave gilbert’s feed. food to Gilbert.

Then, Caillou sat the table he was a big is surprise. sat at the table and was very surprised.

But Caillou’s parents were worried about Caillou.

Then, all surprise finish. the surprise ended.

I want Cauillou’s make breakfast eating. to eat the breakfast Caillou made.

The complimented had breakfast together. They complimented him and had breakfast together.

Score: C+

Tips)

• "check sletp the parents" → "checked if his parents were sleeping": 문장을 더 자연스럽게 고쳤어요.
• "is" → "was", "prepare" → "prepared": 과거형을 맞춰야 해요.
• "him self" → "himself": "himself"는 한 단어예요!
• "was surprise from" → "was surprised by": "surprise"는 동사가 아니라 "surprised"가 맞아요.
• "sat the table" → "sat at the table": "sat"은 "at the table"과 함께 쓰는 것이 자연스러워요.
• "all surprise finish" → "the surprise ended": 문장을 더 자연스럽게 수정했어요.
• "Cauillou’s make breakfast eating" → "to eat the breakfast Caillou made": 문법을 맞춰서 바꿨어요.
• "The complimented had breakfast together" → "They complimented him and had breakfast together": 주어를 명확히 하고 문장을 더 자연스럽게 만들었어요!

잘했어요! 문장을 조금 더 다듬으면 훨씬 자연스럽고 멋진 글이 될 거예요. 😊✨