Hello Jaden! ^~^ This is gentle
guy Bolt! First of all, welcome to Friday Euphony class. Thank you for giving
me a chance to watch your performance in the class. Also, I am keenly aware of
the fact that you put tremendous effort to perform this presentation. While you delivered your presentation, I could see your pain staking
effort for this performance but still it has a room for improvement. I would
like to give you several feedbacks in the hope of your advancement.
[Pronunciation]
- If you are not sure about the
sound, I recommend you make a visit this site (http://www.merriam-webster.com)
Devotion - [de] sound is close to [드] rather than [디].
Scholar - [l] sound was a bit weak. Make
a clear [l] sound.
Poor
- [oo] sound in the word is more close to [ㅗ] sound
than [ㅜ].
While - [l] sound was a bit weak. Make a clear [l]
sound.
[Ending sound]
Called-bandits-attemped-captured-belongings
[Accent & Intonation]
Good
accent and intonation~!!
[Tone of voice & manner]
Overall tone of voice and manner was great enough. However,
if you volume up on the on the stage, you can catch the attention.
My sincere hope is these comments
above help you become a better presenter. If you need any help with this, feel
free to contact me at any time without hesitation. I will always support you!
Please, keep your momentum going! See you again. Thank you profusely!