Hello harbi! ^~^ This is gentle
guy Bolt! First of all, welcome to Friday Euphony class. Thank you for giving
me a chance to watch your performance in the class. Also, I am keenly aware of
the fact that you put tremendous effort to perform this presentation. While you delivered your presentation, I could see your pain staking
effort for this performance but still it has a room for improvement. I would
like to give you several feedbacks in the hope of your advancement.
[Pronunciation]
- If you are not sure about the
sound, I recommend you make a visit this site (http://www.merriam-webster.com)
Jewish - [sh] sound
was a bit weak.
Policy - [o] sound is close to [ㅏ] rather than [ㅓ].
Torch - [ch] sound
was a bit weak.
Deeply - in
the case of [ee], it is better to pronounce as long as you can
[Ending sound]
Jewish-torch
[Accent & Intonation]
Good
accent and intonation~!!
[Tone of voice & manner]
While watching your performance, I
could figure out two weak points. Your tone of voice and manner were great
My sincere hope is these comments
above help you become a better presenter. If you need any help with this, feel
free to contact me at any time without hesitation. I will always support you!
Please, keep your momentums going! See you again. Thank you profusely!