Hello dwight! ^~^ This is
gentle guy Bolt! First of all, welcome to Friday Euphony class. Thank you for
giving me a chance to watch your performance in the class. Also, I am keenly
aware of the fact that you put tremendous effort to perform this presentation. While you delivered your presentation, I could see your pain staking
effort for this performance but still it has a room for improvement. I would
like to give you several feedbacks in the hope of your advancement.
[Pronunciation]
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Class - [l] was a bit weak.
Well - [l] was a bit weak.
[Ending sound]
[Accent & Intonation]
Good
accent and intonation~!!
[Tone of voice & manner]
Thank to your endless attending,
your presentation was better than before. Therefore if you keep attending the Friday
euphony class, you can change for the better.
My sincere hope is these comments
above help you become a better presenter. If you need any help with this, feel
free to contact me at any time without hesitation. I will always support you!
Please, keep your momentums going! See you again. Thank you profusely!