Hello dealyn! ^~^ This is
gentle guy Bolt! First of all, welcome to Friday Euphony class. Thank you for
giving me a chance to watch your performance in the class. Also, I am keenly
aware of the fact that you put tremendous effort to perform this presentation. While you delivered your presentation, I could see your pain staking
effort for this performance but still it has a room for improvement. I would
like to give you several feedbacks in the hope of your advancement.
[Pronunciation]
- If you are not sure about the
sound, I recommend you make a visit this site (http://www.merriam-webster.com)
[Ending
sound]
Great ending sound
[Accent & Intonation]
Good
accent and intonation~!!
[Tone of voice & manner]
Watching your presentation, I was
deeply touched by your great tone of voice and manner. It means you have
studied very hard with a moment. So thank you for attending my class
My sincere hope is these comments
above help you become a better presenter. If you need any help with this, feel
free to contact me at any time without hesitation. I will always support you!
Please, keep your momentums going! See you again. Thank you profusely!