Re: Max and Ruby - Felix

[Teacher Winget]

The title of these cartoons are "Ruby's Merit Badge, Max's Apple, and Quiet Max."

Ep. 1 - Ruby and Louise are going to do their homework about the Bunny Scout camp with her doll. Louise is checks checks how much Ruby that how know about care knows about first aid. Louise teaches Ruby how to use a bandage, but it is hard to bandage dolls. So Ruby decides to practice by bandaging her brother, Max. When they finish bandaging him, the Bunny Scout Leader is come comes to their home. Max is want wants to eat ice cream, so he take takes his ice cream from the freezer. However, the fire truck toy is hit hits him, so he is try tries to catch the ice cream on the fire truck toy. Then his bandage is untied becomes untied and It is gets tied up in the table. When the Bunny Scout Leader is come comes to Max, It is tied up well the bandage is tied up nicely. So she is give gives a badge to Ruby.

Score: B

Tips:

• Clarify the sequence of events to make the story easier to follow.
• Describe Ruby's feelings when she successfully earns the badge.
• Ensure proper capitalization and punctuation.
• Use the correct verb forms to maintain tense consistency (e.g., "comes" instead of "is come").
• Maintain subject-verb agreement and correct sentence structure (e.g., "Max wants" instead of "Max is want").
• Use appropriate articles and pronouns for clarity (e.g., "the Bunny Scout Leader" instead of "bunny scout leader").
• Correctly use descriptive words to improve clarity (e.g., "nicely" instead of "well").