The book's title is Milly and Molly, go camping "Milly and Molly Go Camping". Milly and Molly go camping every summer. Milly and Molly's dad help helps making make the tent. They get blenket blanket for their bad bed, an old wooden box for secret things, chocolate, a doll and a flash light. Frist First, their they're at on the lawn in the front yard. Second, they camped camp at in the back yard under the lemon tree. On the third day, they camped camp outside the fence and stayed stay out for half the night. They go to the forest~~,. they They set the box, flashlight, and doll at where they can be easily found. Tey They eat dinner and read a book at night to and use the flashlight. They feel scary scared more, more and more. It was just a cat,~~. they They had camped all night.
Score: B+
Tips:
- Add more details about what Milly and Molly do while camping.
- Describe the sounds and sights they experience in nature.
- Tell us how they feel after their camping adventure.
- Use more exciting words to make the story more interesting