Hello Blair! ^~^ This is gentle
guy Bolt! First of all, welcome to Friday Euphony class. Thank you for giving
me a chance to watch your performance in the class. Also, I am keenly aware of
the fact that you put tremendous effort to perform this presentation. While you delivered your presentation, I could see your painstaking
effort for this performance but still it has a room for improvement. I would
like to give you several feedbacks in the hope of your advancement.
[Pronunciation]
- If you are not sure about the
sound, I recommend you make a visit this site (http://www.merriam-webster.com)
Redefining - [de] sound is close to [디] rather than [지].
Bailout – [l] sound was a bit weak.
[Ending sound]
Requires
[Accent & Intonation]
Good
accent and intonation~!!
[Tone of voice & manner]
Thank you for taking euphony class.
Overall, your presentation was comfortable and stable. If you keep attending
the class, you can reach your goal.
My sincere hope is these comments above
help you become a better presenter. If you need any help with this, feel free
to contact me at any time without hesitation. I will always support you!
Please, keep your momentums going! See you again. Thank you profusely!