The book's title is caillou Caillou Daycare. The main character is Caillou. It was Cailloufirst 's first day at Daycare daycare. He feel felt nervous to go Daycare to daycare. He don't didn't want to go Daycare to daycare. He want wanted to stay with mom his mom. His mom going to took him to Daycare daycare. He went to daycare. he He was shy. He sitting sat at the end after his mom left. While Caillou playing was playing, a child came and took away Caillou's toy. He made friends and had fun at daycare.
Grade: B
Tips):
- Remember to use 's to show that something belongs to someone (Caillou**'s** first day).
- Use the past tense for actions that happened in the past (He felt, He didn't, He wanted).
- Always write "to" before places (go to Daycare).
- Make sure the sentences start with a capital letter and end with a period.
- Add more details about what Caillou did at daycare to make the story more interesting.