Re: Max&Ruby summary-Ellie

[Teacher Winget]

Today's story's title is "Ruby's Home Run."

Last day The day before, Ruby promised to play a baseball with her friends.

Then the nextday the next day, Ruby and Max arrived at the playground, and Ruby was went went to the small baseball stadium.

Max rided rode a slide in the playground. But it didn't fun wasn't fun.
So, Max have had to play with his toys.

While Ruby play was playing a baseball, Max flew the airplane to Ruby his airplane toward Ruby.

Ruby wants to success the home run but it didn't worked by Max
wanted to hit a home run, but it didn’t work because of Max.

And Max flew the drone while Ruby play was playing the baseball.
Max control controlled the drone to success home run to help Ruby hit a home run.

Finally, Ruby was home run by Max hit a home run because of Max!

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Score: A

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Tips)

• “the nextday”는 “the next day”처럼 띄어 써야 해요.

• “was went”는 틀렸어요. “went”만 써야 해요.

• “rided”는 “rode”로 바꿔야 해요.

• “success a home run”은 안 맞는 표현이에요. “hit a home run”이라고 해야 해요.

• Ruby가 홈런을 쳤을 때 어떤 기분이었는지 한 문장 써보세요.

• 마지막에 Max와 Ruby가 어떻게 함께 놀았는지 추가하면 더 따뜻한 결말이 돼요.