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font-family:Arial;color:black'>Mon. Jan. 19 Snowy<span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:jim" datetime="2004-01-20T18:46"></ins></span></span></p>
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line-height:14.0pt;'><span style='font-size:11.0pt; font-family:Arial;color:black'> <br>
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Sliced raw fish is one of the most favorite food. <br>
So...sometimes my father used to buy it. <br>
Today's sliced raw fish is a mullet which is very tasty. <br>
I was really so happy and appreciated my father.</span></p></td>
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style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial;
color:black'>Mon. Jan. 19 Snowy</span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;
font-family:Arial;color:black;'><span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:jim" datetime="2004-01-20T18:44"></ins></span></span></p>
<p class=MsoBodyText2 style='text-align:
justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;line-height:14.0pt;'><span style='font-size:11.0pt; font-family:Arial;color:black'><span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:jim"
datetime="2004-01-20T18:44"> <br>
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</del></span>Sliced raw fish is one of </span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;
font-family:Arial;color:black;'><span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:jim" datetime="2004-01-20T18:46">my </ins></span></span><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial;
color:black'><span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:jim"
datetime="2004-01-20T18:46">the most</del></span> favorite food. </span><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial;
color:black;'><span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:jim"
datetime="2004-01-20T18:46"></ins></span></span></p>
<p class=MsoBodyText2 style='text-align:
justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;line-height:14.0pt;'><span style='font-size:11.0pt; font-family:Arial;color:black'><span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:jim"
datetime="2004-01-20T18:46"><br>
</del></span>So...sometimes my father <span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:jim" datetime="2004-01-20T18:46">used to</del></span> buy</span><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial;
color:black;'><span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:jim"
datetime="2004-01-20T18:48">s</ins></span></span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;
font-family:Arial;color:black'> it. <br>
Today's sliced raw fish </span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial;color:black;'><span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:jim" datetime="2004-01-20T18:48">was </ins></span></span><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial;
color:black'><span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:jim"
datetime="2004-01-20T18:48">is</del></span> a mullet </span><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial;
color:black;'><span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:jim"
datetime="2004-01-20T18:48">and it was </ins></span></span><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial;
color:black'><span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:jim"
datetime="2004-01-20T18:48">which is </del></span>very tasty. <br>
I was really <span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:jim"
datetime="2004-01-20T18:48">so</del></span> happy and appreciated my father.</span></p></td>
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line-height:14.0pt;'><span style='font-size:11.0pt;
font-family:Arial;'><strong>Comment:</strong> Good writing. Keep it up.</span></p>
<p style='text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph;
line-height:14.0pt;'><span style='font-size:11.0pt;
font-family:Arial;'><strong>Personal comment:</strong> I also like raw fish. You are making me hungry. :-)</span></p></td>
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My favorite food--sliced raw fish
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