The story’s title is Cailliou Caillou at Daycare.
One day he go went to the daycare. He doesn’t leave mom didn't want to leave his mom. Caillou meet met so many friends. His mom was worried, but he was a very good student. but bad guy come bothered him but girl helped him A bad guy came and bothered him, but a girl helped him. They are making draw drew together. The bad guy then play played with them.
Cailliou Caillou thinks thought this is was a very fun place. His main mom and dad come and bring him came to bring him home.
l I think this book is fun.
Grade: B
Tips):
- Use past tense for actions that happened in the past (went, didn't, met).
- Use names and proper nouns correctly (Caillou, daycare).
- Make sure sentences are complete and clear. Add missing words to make sense.
- Start each sentence with a capital letter and end with a period.