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It was gloomy day. I’m a job seeker. Yesterday, I received the fail mail from the company which is I really wanted to enter. To get inside this company, I spent my holiday writing my resume. I have collected the newspaper related that company and field and studied that is needed to perform the task, moreover I have some experience while at university. Sometimes I drew a fine picture of my future I work something in the office, but that was a fancy merely. It’s not real. I am afraid that I remain a person without a regular occupation; furthermore, I have to refund my loaned money of university tuition fees from the end of this year, which is made me become depressed. When I leave my first job, I felt confident of success, but I regret having done occasionally. I am unemployed and I have no money, I have a dream only, but after looking fail mail, I couldn’t get up today. I wanted to stay in the bed because my strength is gone. Although the sun rose, I didn’t stand up I wandered in darkness. Later, however, I changed my mind. I got up and I washed my face and I determined to be not a failure. My problem is toeic score but it will go up if I do my best. I saw the news about actress 정다빈's death. I felt sad as well as the number of people was sorrowful at her story; however, she is another. She was dead but I am alive. She is not exist but I am still in existence. She was history, but I will make history and I will be recognized. It’s not wise to kill oneself. Pray for the repose of the deceased. |
It was gloomy day. I’m a job seeker. Yesterday, I received
I am unemployed and I have no money. I saw the news about the actress, 정다빈's death. I felt sad. I also read
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