This story title is Caillou at Daycare. Caillou's mom is take took Caillou to daycare. But Caillou don't didn't want to go to daycare. However, Caillou go went to daycare. Caillou saw many blocks. Someone hit Caillou's hand, so Caillou crying cried. Ather Another friend call called Caillou. Friends like cutting something She was cutting something. Caillou draw drew a picture. Another friend came and said he wanted to learn too. I read this story, After I read this story, I saw that Caillou hated daycare at first, but he seemed to like it later. It's like looking at myself when I was young.
Grade: B+
Tips):
- Use possessive form correctly (Caillou**'s** mom).
- Use past tense for actions that happened in the past (took, didn't, went, cried, called, drew).
- Make sure each sentence is clear and complete.
- Start each sentence with a capital letter and end with a period.