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I'm an atheist, but when I got hard time, I've always kept my point of view. I've always thought that God must love me very very much with partiality, because if he didn't love me. surely he might not give me a great present which is grabbing me very hardly, if he thought that I'm a wrong person who can't stand it, he might not give me a big present and might give others. Because he wanna make me a better person. And I really believe that he also thinks that I can stand it, and I'll become a better person. My life in 20s isn't pretty like a sweet story in a fairy tale and what I had imagined on my bed. But I think that I'm soooo lucky girl who got a present from God. In my 20s, I've learned that life is consisted of "the sour", "the sweet", "the bitter", "the hot", if I always wanna taste the sweet like a covetousness girl, I'll never taste the sweet, and also, I'll forget the flavor of the sweet. Actually life is hard. It's supposed to be. If I didn't suffer, I'd never learn anything. That's why I have to suffer what really made me depressed. That's why I have to enjoy a special present which God gave me. Anyway, "May her soul rest in peace...." |
I'm an atheist, but when I Anyway, "May her soul rest in peace...." Hmm….very philosophical…for a young girl..hmm… |
첫댓글 선생님 감사합니닷~^^
It was a long way to pass exiting, but this is time for ... enjoy yourself. I'm on your side.