[Jim's Correction] Re:Life is not beer and skittles 5

[Jim Lee]

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I'm an atheist, but when I got  hard time, I've always kept my point of view. I've always thought that God must love me very very much with partiality, because if  he didn't love me. surely he might not give me a great present which is grabbing me very hardly, if he thought that I'm  a wrong person who can't stand it, he might not give me a big present and might give others. Because he wanna make me a better person. And I really believe that he also thinks that I can stand it, and I'll become a better person. My life in 20s isn't pretty like a sweet story in a fairy tale and what I had imagined on my bed. But I think that I'm soooo lucky girl who got a present from God. In my 20s, I've learned that life is consisted of "the sour", "the sweet", "the bitter", "the hot", if I always wanna taste the sweet like a covetousness girl, I'll never taste the sweet, and also, I'll forget the flavor of the sweet. Actually life is hard. It's supposed to be. If I didn't suffer, I'd never learn anything. That's why I have to suffer what really made me depressed. That's why I have to enjoy a special present which God gave me. Anyway, "May her soul rest in peace...."

I'm an atheist, but when I gotam having a  hard time, I've always kept my point of view. I've always thought that God must love me very very much with partiality, because if  he didn't love me. surely he might not have given me a great present which is grabbing me very hardly, if he thought that I'm  a wrong person who can't stand it, he might not have given me a big present and might given it to others. Because he wanna make me a better person. And I really believe that he also thinks that I can overcome stand it, and I'll become a better person. My life in my 20s isn't pretty like a sweet story in a fairy tale and what I had imagined while lying on my bed. But I think that I'm soooo a very lucky girl who got a present from God. In my 20s, I've learned that life is filled with consisted of "the sour", "the sweet", "the bitter", "the hot", if I always wanna taste the sweet things in life like a covetousness girl, I'll never taste the sweetness of life, and also, I'll forget the flavor of the sweetness. Actually, life is hard. It's supposed to be. If I didn't suffer, I'd never learn anything. That's why I have to suffer what really made me depressed. That's why I have to enjoy a the special present which God gave me. Anyway, "May her soul rest in peace...." Hmm….very philosophical…for a young girl..hmm…

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