[Corrected] In the movie theater~~

[Jim Lee]

Your writing	My corrections
Today is the last of the holiday. So I went to the movie theater with my brother. We decided to see "말죽거리 잔혹사" 권상우 were cast as a hero in the movie. 권상우 is the best popular movie star thesedays. Most of the women are going crazy when he is showed up. Today I also can see many girls who like him. There are two girls back of my seat. They cried out when 권상우 shows up in the picture. ou~~~~~~~~~~~a~~~~~~oh~~~~~~~~~~~~~(so many times I can hear their voice.) The movie is very interesing. But that situation is more interest me than story of the movie. He is tall and buff and his muscular body seemed to the best. And his play is also very attractive. Maybe I think they can't sleep well cause of their hero.	Today is the last day of the holiday. So I went to a the movie theater with my brother. We decided to see "말죽거리 잔혹사" 권상우 was were a cast as thea hero in the movie. 권상우 is the most best popular movie star thesedays. Most of the women go are going crazy when he is showsed up. Today, I also can see many girls who like him. There wereare two girls sitting in the back of my seat. They cried out when 권상우 showeds up in the picture. ou~~~~~~~~~~~a~~~~~~oh~~~~~~~~~~~~~(so many times I can hear their voices.) The movie was is very interesting. But that the situation where the girls were screaming was is more interesting to me than story of the movie. He is tall and buffed up. and hHis muscular body seemed to the best very sexy. And his acting play is was also very attractive. Maybe I think they can't sleep well because of their hero.
Comment: Great writing!  You did a great job. Personal comment: I guess 권상우 is a popular guy nowadays.  I also like him.  And unlikely other good looking actors, he acts quite well.

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