<p>I disagree with violent video games should be allowed for sale.</p><p>Firstly, if you become addicted to violent games and play a lot, it may cause mental problems or affect your daliy life.</p><p>Plus, violent games has a negative relationship with feelings of 공격성 and 생체반응</p><p>For example, If you tarnish in violent games,</p><p>no one knows what will happen.</p><p>In addition, violent games are more anxious than the other games. So</p><p>Finally, These days, children are often exposed to phones. As a result, curiosity will lead you to experience violent games.</p><p>Therefore, I agree with violent games should not allowed for sale.</p><p> </p>
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첫댓글 공격성 -> aggression , 생체반응 -> biological response
Your essay is good, Dony!