Re: Caillou summary (Yulia)

[Teacher Winget]

The cartoon title is Caillou at Daycare.

Caillou didn't want to go to daycare. Mom persuaded Caillou and Caillou met his teacher** and** friends. So Caillou was scared and shy. Now his mom had to go. But Caillou wanted to stay with his mom. Unwillingly, his mom 's was gone. And Clementine talked to Caillou. Clementine and Caillou played with art supply supplies. Caillou going was going to paint a robin. By the way, Caillou painted a robin well. Leo thought Caillou is was good at paint painting. So Caillou and Clementine made a castle with blocks. And Leo tried to paint a robin. Suddenly, Caillou's dad and mom came to daycare in order to to take Caillou . home. But Caillou didn't want to go home because Caillou had to make he wanted to make the tower higher. And Caillou boasted showed off his castle. So Everyone laughed.

Grade: B+

Tips):

1. Use conjunctions properly to connect ideas smoothly (and, because).
2. Use the correct tense for actions (was going, was good at painting).
3. Make sure to use complete sentences and avoid starting sentences with "And".
4. Be specific and clear in your descriptions.